Review: I didn't enjoy this as I thought I would. For starters, I picked this up thinking it was more religious than it was. But any mention of God or religious ideology came only in the form of the word "god" (small g), who function more like a disembodied and unsure voice, used as a foil to move the poem along. Mostly, she wrote about birds and other subjects that I couldn't always identify. There was nothing religious at all.
Second, there was little to distinguish the poems from each other. Often the
ending didn’t connect to the beginning. And because the subject of each poem is
unclear, they muddle together, no clear distinction between one and the next. Just
long rambling lines of words, often strung together with odd punctuation or
pauses intended to add drama but seemed pretentious. If she was trying to
convey a certain emotion or concept, it was lost in the verbose muddle of her
work. The poems felt as if she made a bag of the most common and lofty words
used in poetry and grabbed a handful for each stanza, without regard to if they
connected at all. Others may find her work worth reading, but not me. It wasn’t
my sort of poetry.
Bookmarks: 6 of 10
Awards: Kingsley Tufts Poetry Award, 2013
ISBN: 978-55659-385-7
Year Published: 2011
Date Finished: 4-14-2016
Pages: 87
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